Each month a regular challenge is set to give Alpha Writers a chance to flex their writing muscles and engage in some friendly competition. Read on for details of present and previous challenges, entries and results!

CHALLENGE 4
Alpha Day 4: 15 November 2007

Challenge 4 is to write a story of exactly 100 words including a given noun, verb, adjective and city name. The given words are: mackerel, jostle, sensual, Alice Springs.

Please send your entries to Geoff by Tuesday 4th December and I'll try and distribute them before Easter.


RESULTS:


Winning entries: Clare and Rosemary (tied for first place):

Clare's entry:

The jockeys jostle for position on the final bend.

The grey breaks free from the pack, and comes thundering down the straight.

It`s all over!

“So, it`s Holy Mackerel first, followed by …..” drones the tannoy. I tear up my ticket and wander off in search of a drink.

An hour and several whiskies later, I gaze blearily at the pretty barmaid.

“What`s this place called?” I ask.

“Alice Springs.”

“Why?”

“`Cause I`m Alice,” she drawls, with a grin, “and that`s for starters …”

She walks away with a sensual wiggle, and I decide the day is definitely looking up.


Rosemary's entry:

It was Alice Springs turn to cook dinner. “What we ‘avin mum?” she called upstairs.

“Fish luv, but I forgot to buy it.”

“Don’t worry, Joss’ll get it,” grinned Alice.

“No probs,” smiled Joss thinking of the sensual girl on the fish stall.

Joss ran under the mackerel sky to the market.

“Hey Carrie, two pounds of cod and a date please.”

“Go on,” she blushed. “It’s busy today.”

“Joss’ll just jostle his way through,” the lad said brightly. “Tuesday at 8?”

Joss returned whistling. “Did you get the fish?” called mum.

“He got more than fish,” shouted Alice laughing.


Runners up: Sally, Tara and Olaf


Sally's entry:

I sit on the deck watching mackerel jostle the water’s surface, dancing with sunlight.  

Ben flicks the line expertly in one smooth, sensual movement, and pulls it in again wriggling with silver.  

“Where did you learn that?” I ask admiringly.  

He grins sideways.   “In a dry river,” he says in his languid Aussie drawl.  

“Oh come on,” I protest, laughing.  

“It was in Alice Springs,” he says. “I used to practise hooking Abos. So long as they weren’t drunk they moved pretty fast. But I always got ‘em in the end.”

A cloud passes over the sun, and I shiver.


Tara's entry:

The jostling at the airport terminal is forgotten now that I'm on the plane. Smiling, I make my way from the shabbiness of economy to the sensual luxury that is first class.

It’s difficult not to think about last night. It wasn’t a proper date, but Tony was wonderful company, and I can almost taste the delicious mackerel salad I ate at the restaurant in Alice Springs.

As I continue along the aisle, the captain's calm, masculine voice interrupts my reverie.

"Cabin Crew, please take your seats for take-off."

Still thinking of Tony, I smile and do as he says.


Olaf's entry:

“A week at Alice Springs for two lucky people just £400” was the sprat, laced with photographs of sunbathers, designed to catch the mackerel. Men and women besieged the offices, attempting to head the queue. Chosen were Ben and Serena. As they handed over their cash, they were jostled into a waiting car. Speeding past Heathrow and hurtling into Wales, the journey discomfort was countered by a growing sensual dimension to their physical contact. Their enthusiasm was dampened by rain as they arrived at the gates of the Alice Springs golf club (at Abergavenny).

Even the deck chairs had umbrellas.




Previous Alpha challenges for 2007/2008:
Challenge 1 - Cold
Challenge 2 - Anniversary Poem
Challenge 3 - Picture

Alpha challenges and results for Year 2 (2005/2006)

Alpha challenges and results for Year 3 (2006/2007)


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