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CHALLENGE 5
Alpha Day 5: 17 December 2009

Hi Folks,

Here's Challenge 5 to squeeze in between Olaf's Quiz and the Parson's Nose:

Write a poem of between 12 and 24 lines based around a smell. Any rhyme scheme you like or no rhyme. How many words per line is up to you.

Good luck... and Happy Christmas! I hope 2010 will be good for your health, happiness and writing!

- Geoff


RESULTS:


Winning entry by Zena:

It weaves its tendrils around my mind,
A will’o’the wisp teasing my memory,
Curling, meandering like mist on the mere,
Unconscious, unknowing.
It insinuates itself in a moment.
I know it so well it comforts me. I know it so well….
But it has no name, just a feeling, a mood,
A remembrance of something beyond my reach
As insubstantial as the smell itself.
It colours my view, lightens my mood,
Lingers in my reality.
And then I know, and my father’s presence fills my life again.
Something of him is near, though he can never be.
He surrounds me with love and protection
Borne on a smell I cannot name,
A presence I cannot describe.  

Then it’s gone, tendrils withdrawn as fast as they appeared,
Hiding in the depths of my mind.
Nothing remains but the memory of the memory
And the lingering comfort of my father.


Runners up: Sally, Geoff, and Christine


Sally's entry:

6am thoughts

I love the smell of weeding in the morning
sharp tang of chill still air
new-mown grass sweet like pear
sun-warmth on wood and hair

I love the smell of weeding in the morning
warm skin on cold steel slide
bitter and sour as hide
my warm shed open wide

I love the smell of weeding in the morning
cocktail of earth leaf seeds
yesterday's busy deeds
hanging like scented beads

I love the smell of weeding in the morning
breath of earth freed and sweet
stirring beneath my feet
freshly relaid and neat


Geoff's entry:

It was lank, it stank, made my gall-stones clank
With its blighting, vile, slimy-biled, gut-riling swank.
I heaved as it seethed, like a weapon unsheathed.
With its rasping, my gasping to be fast relieved.

But how to quench this soul-wrenching stench
As it gripped my life’s script in a breath-clipped clench?
Numbed by earth’s scummiest organic hum,
My gunge-filled lungs plunged in a toxic-strung scrum.

My pores, gored by spores galore, saw this as war.
Sense-splattered, I clattered like tacks to the floor.
The pure putrefaction that provoked this reaction,
Was worse than the curse of a pliers tooth extraction.

I crawled from the hall as a pall of smoke sprawled
And veins in my brain strained and brawled…
Then it gelled with a splat…. yes, I smelled a rat,
And sensed repentence from Suspect, my cat.

Not dimming the soup from brimming to simmer,
This near death-nell smell, it swelled so much grimmer.
Face knotted, I spotted a pot-load of rat rot.
The unsavoury debris of my gorgeous pet, Grot.


Christine's entry:

A Holiday Romance

He gave her a stylish goatskin belt – before he left the place,
The Grecian demigod who made her throw away her past.
The smell lingered on; half musky beast, half manly, hot embrace.

He smiled at her in Athens and her heart began to race.
One week rolled into months and still she wanted it to last.
He gave her a stylish goatskin belt – before he left the place.

He piped the tunes of Pan, her body dancing to their pace,
His hirsute legs enlacing hers, the rhythm moving fast.
The smell lingered on; half musky beast, half manly, hot embrace.

He was a faun and she his nymph, laughing all through the chase.
His satyr’s grin enchanted her, the magic spells he cast.
He gave her a stylish goatskin belt – before he left the place.

She searched all the tavernas and the bars but found no trace.
She yearned and burned to join her love, the effort spent was vast.
The smell lingered on; half musky beast, half manly, hot embrace.

Through wood and vale she drifted, a grey pallor marked her face.
The belt, half goat, half artful man around her waist was clasped.
The smell lingered on; half musky beast, half manly, hot embrace.
He gave her a stylish goatskin belt – before he left the place.

Previous Alpha challenges for 2009/2010:
Challenge 1 - Election
Challenge 2 - Sport obituary
Challenge 3 - Novel
Challenge 4 - Lost in Fiction

Alpha challenges and results for Year 2 (2005/2006)

Alpha challenges and results for Year 3 (2006/2007)

Alpha challenges and results for Year 4 (2007/2008)

Alpha challenges and results for Year 5 (2008/2009)



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