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CHALLENGE 8
Alpha Day 8: 18 February 2010

Hi all,

My challenge is the usual maximum of 300 words, but I want contributions where you describe that place which is very special to you. The contributions should therefore be fitting to be entitled "My Place."

Your place must be interpreted physically; it is not about your place in society, or in the sports arena. The emphasis is to be on descriptive writing. I would like to see it, smell it, maybe even recognise it. It could be your town, your home, your room, your chair, your office and so on, but it will have special significance for respondents.

Thank you - and enjoy writing.

- Betty


RESULTS:


Winning entry by Celia:

My place

I’m lying quite still in a ditch where the woods meet the lane. No one can see me. Cold water covers my body and caresses my cheeks. I’m wearing a red jumper, black trousers and black shoes. Roots tangle in my long hair, the colour of dead leaves, and nettles have formed a roof over me. I can see through the criss-crossed stems to the sky above, sometimes cloudy sometimes clear. I watch the arc of the sun as it measures out time and at night I listen to the movements of animals and the sudden rushing of wind in the trees. I wait for someone to find me, but no one comes.

It was springtime when I arrived in this place, and for months I was alone, except for the occasional passing car. Then came the sound of people on the other side of the lane, the south side where the blackberries grow. It must have been autumn. I heard the laughter of children and imagined their grubby little hands and faces stained red with juice. The family didn’t stay long; there was an unpleasant odour, which they concluded was ‘probably a dead badger’.

In a town 50 miles away there is a faded poster of me in a bus shelter. My family put it there. They still hope to find me, though the search parties were called off long ago. I became one of 200,000 who go missing every year.

So my family hope. They scour every newspaper, every picture, though they are not sure what they are looking for. What happened, they ask. I ask it, too.

I have plenty of time to think, for I cannot rest. Here in my place I look towards the heavens above. I am becoming the earth, but still I wait.


Runners up: Clare, Zena, and Geoff


Clare's entry:

MY PLACE

I inhale as I step across the threshold – traces of incense, ozone, and clean linen – a heady mix. Amber pads in beside me and settles with a contented sigh onto her blanket in the corner.

I reacquaint myself with my surroundings – white painted floorboards, simple square wooden table and two blue director chairs, walls adorned with paintings, poetry, collages and shell pictures, a small cupboard for crockery, and of course, my little stove and kettle.

Running my fingers across the rough surface of the whitewood table, I carefully lay down my notebook and pen.

Flinging open the shutters, I drag a chair to the open door, take a deep breath, and sit. Just sit. And stare. Take in the amazing view. The waves are rolling in today, and the sound of the current pulling back on the shingle vibrates through my being. The mournful cry of the seagulls overhead, as they circle, looking hopefully for a brave tourist carrying any sort of food, reminds me it is lunchtime.

But I am not hungry. Not for food anyway. I just want to lap up this atmosphere. It is never busy here even in the height of summer, but at this time of year, Amber and I have the whole area to ourselves, apart from the gulls.

The wind is quite strong off the coast, and the white horses leap and froth. The winter sun tries gamely to spread a little warmth across the wooden balcony, casting shadow patterns on the cream and blue shutters.

The grassy slopes stretch from the quiet road above, down to the promenade below. The peace and inspiration I find here is worth far more than that I could find in expensive spas, retreat centres or hotels.

My beach hut is My Place.


Zena's entry:

In my mind I’m on the island. I climb the dusty path up the wooded hill, past the little shrine which glints in the evening sun. Cicadas sing in the bushes and trees, falling silent as I pass and chirring again as I move on. I pause to look down on the roofs of the shrinking village and catch my breath in the hot, still air.

As I climb higher, the trees thin out and I walk over dried, grassy ground littered with rocks that snag my sandalled feet. Near the summit I stop. The chirring seems to be the air now, filling every crevice so that I’m breathing it, part of it, becoming it. It smells of warm stone, herbs and leaves.

I stand above the world alone, everything in perspective. Far below, the houses of the village are a white brushstroke in a broader landscape. An arm of land shelters them, stretches into the sea, a harbour curling in on itself, and a ferry boat leaves the island, a soundless speck laying a white trail across the water. Far distant, the grey peaks of the mainland lace the horizon above the glass-still turquoise sea.

Goats leap on the slope above me, their bells a tympany to the cicaca chorus, as I sit on the time-smoothed ruins of a stone wall and sip red wine warmed from the climb.

The sun hovers on the horizon and I know the old man is waiting patiently at the foot of the path for my return, ensuring I’m not lost on the hill in the dark. As dusk falls I breath the clean air, feel the warmth and permanence of the ancient stones, and I feel safe.

My mind is filled with peace and calmness.


Geoff's entry:

Repugnant. That might be the muttered or bellowed word of choice if fellow Alphas dared to enter my writing place. They might suspect it of being staged and suggest that nobody would dream of trying to create anything amongst such chaos. They’d be wrong of course, because here I am sitting slap bang in the middle of it hammering out my Challenge 8 entry.

So, does this cluttered landscape enhance my muse in some perverse way? Not in the slightest. I loathe it. The seventeen slain ants left over from a rather frenzied email-checking session this morning are about as conducive to writing as the encrusted turmeric that will need soaking from the side of one of the strewn tumblers encroaching onto my mouse mat. You see? That sentence was far too long but, quagmired by looming paraphernalia, my craving for space strangles any notion of revamping it.

There’s a stapler which I never quite manage to refill, a couple of alarm clocks requiring batteries, three extra watches with assorted spare straps and five guitar strings pining for a guitar… all queuing up to vie with Challenge 8. Ah, I’ve just noticed a very important jam-jar load of multi-coloured elastic bands which would snap through fatigue should I ever dream of stretching them. Not forgetting the tin of old keys that have probably outlived by decades whatever doors they belonged to.

Please, dear reader, don’t mark this entry down for irrelevance. This is where my previous 7 entries were forged. The imminent levelling of this wretched hovel may save my mind and inadvertently my marriage before Challenge 9.

And yes, there are exactly seventeen mangled ants. If only the obsessive compulsive counting could be swapped for an over-tidiness disorder, I’d make a clean sweep of the Alpha league table.

Previous Alpha challenges for 2009/2010:
Challenge 1 - Election
Challenge 2 - Sport obituary
Challenge 3 - Novel
Challenge 4 - Lost in Fiction
Challenge 5 - Smell poem
Christmas Quiz
Challenge 6 - Tabloid journalism
Challenge 7 - Spinning wheel

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